Agents read a great many query letters, and most of them look the same. That is not a reason to despair; it is a reason to be specific. The letter that earns a request is rarely the flashiest one in the pile. It is the one that tells the agent, quickly and cleanly, what the book is, who it is for, and why they are the right person to represent it.
The conventions of the UK query letter can feel oddly formal. They are also fairly consistent, which works in your favour.
Start with the guidelines, not the letter
Every agency publishes submission guidelines, and they differ more than you might expect. Some want a covering letter, a synopsis and the first three chapters pasted into the body of an email. Some use a submission form. Some open only during set windows each year.
Read the agency's guidelines twice. Then read the individual agent's page: their biography, their wishlist, the books they have recently sold. If they say they are looking for historical crime and you have written a cosy mystery set in a village, that is not an automatic no — but your letter needs to show you have done the reading.
Obey the mechanics exactly. If the guidelines ask for the first 10,000 words, do not send 15,000. If they say no attachments, do not attach. Most agencies also ask that you query only one agent within the agency at a time.
The hook: two sentences that do the heavy lifting
Do not open with "I am writing to seek representation for my novel." Open with the story.
A reliable shape is: protagonist, situation, disruption, stakes. For example: "When a Hull ferry pilot finds her late father's logbook lists a passenger who never existed, she has six days to prove the sinking that killed him was no accident." That is a whole novel in one line, and it signals the genre, the tone and the engine of the plot.
Two openings to avoid. The rhetorical question — "What if your best friend was a murderer?" — reads as a marketing pitch. The thematic statement — "My novel explores grief and memory" — tells the agent what the book is about rather than what happens in it.
Put the title, genre and word count either in the first line or straight after the hook, so the agent knows what they are looking at from the start.
Keep the pitch paragraph to the story
One paragraph, roughly 100 to 150 words, covering the spine of the novel. Write in the present tense and third person, even if your book is written in first person.
Cover the protagonist's want, the obstacle in the way, and what happens if they fail. Mention the inciting incident and one major turn. Name two or three characters at most.
Do not withhold the ending. Agents are not readers you must protect from spoilers; they need to see that the plot resolves. And do not spend your words on themes or message — those should be evident from the story you describe.
Word count, genre and comparisons
Give the word count rounded to the nearest thousand: "92,000 words". State the age category — adult, young adult, middle grade — because it changes everything about how the book is sold. Choose a genre label agents actually use, such as upmarket commercial fiction, literary thriller, cosy crime or book club fiction.
Comparisons help if you handle them well. Pick two recent titles, ideally published within the last few years, and use them to show where your book sits on a shelf rather than to claim you have written the next bestseller. A sentence such as "It sits between [Title A] and [Title B], with the pace of the former and the small-town tension of the latter" does far more work than a list of famous names.
Your bio in three lines or fewer
Include only what is relevant to the book. Publication credits — short stories, magazines, competition placings — belong here. So does experience that gives you authority on your subject: a former paramedic writing medical thrillers, a teacher writing about a school.
If you have no credits, say so plainly and move on. "This is my first novel" is a perfectly respectable line. What weakens a bio is padding it with hobbies, or overstating a self-published title as a bestseller.
Etiquette: the details that get noticed
Agents spot carelessness faster than they spot flair. A short list of things to get right:
- Address the agent by name, spelled correctly.
- Personalise a single sentence explaining why you are querying them — a book they represent, an interview they gave. Only if it is true.
- Keep the whole letter to one page, ideally 250 to 350 words.
- Use a plain font and standard formatting. No coloured text, no images, no gimmicks.
- Proofread aloud, and check that the character names in your letter match the manuscript.
- Do not mention how many other agents you have approached, unless you have an offer in hand.
- Do not ask for feedback at this stage; it is not part of the process.
- Include your name, email and the book's title, and send from a professional address.
On simultaneous submissions: many UK agents accept them, but check each set of guidelines. If one agent offers representation while others are still reading, you are expected to tell the others and give them a short window to respond.
Before you hit send
Run through this once more, then stop fiddling with it:
- Guidelines read twice, including the agent's own page.
- Letter one page, addressed by name, with the hook in the first two lines.
- Title, genre, age category and word count stated clearly.
- Pitch paragraph covers protagonist, want, obstacle and stakes.
- Bio honest and brief.
- Sample pages exactly the length requested, double-spaced unless told otherwise.
- Contact details and a polite sign-off.
Keep a simple record of where you sent your work and when, along with the response time stated in the guidelines. If that period passes, one short, courteous follow-up is acceptable. Chasing beyond that rarely helps.
Then get back to writing. The most persuasive thing you can have in your next query letter is a second finished novel.
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